Thesis Statement:  Working as a hostess can be quite disadvantageous in some respects; however, the advantages of the job outweigh the disadvantages.


First Paragraph:

Topic Sentence:  Advantages

Supporting Sentences :  a.  gives the opportunity to travel all round the world

                                        b.  visit the places wouldn't normally see otherwise

                                        c.  young colleagues, have fun together

                                        d.  get cheap holidays for yourself and family

Second Paragraph : 

Topic Sentence :  Disadvantages

Supporting Sentences :  a.  pretty hard physically so need to be fit, healthy and have a good

                                             strong pair of feet

                                        b.  sometimes get difficult passengers who are never satisfied

Conclusion :  Good things outweigh the bad things.  Working as a hostess gives you the opportunities no other job can give.